Dawn Young (112 words)
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JACK AND JILL
“Jumping Juniper
cloudless skies!”
Jack is curious,
“Jill,” he cries.
Chirping chick-a-des.
Buzzing bees!
Squirls scampering,
humming trees.
Spring’s awakening.
“Let’s go hop!
Hill awaiting
at the top.”
Pail is waterless,
not in need.
Chores forgotten
yes, indeed!
Jill is overjoyed.
Spring has sprung.
Flying butterflies,
Oh, what fun!
Brand new buttercups
fill the fields.
Nice and colorful.
beauty yields.
Day was fabulous.
Sky turns gray.
Rain’s predicted,
We can’t stay.
Running hurriedly
down we go.
Jill starts tumbling
fast not slow.
Rolling lopsided
boom she falls.
Standing vertically,
“Help!” Jill calls.
Shrieking bellowing,
“I’m not hurt!”
Brushing franticly,
lots of dirt.
Walking silently
had a blast.
Comfy residence,
home at last!
mrsgoodchoice 
Oh my goodness…this is so uplifting and delightful!!! I read it over several times, just for the smiles it put on my face. What a fun, fanciful twist to the old poem. Love the new perspective!
Your insights and takent amaze me!!!
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What a fun, bouncing rhyme. It feels like it would work well for a board book.
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Thanks for sharing this twist on Jack and Jill with us for the spring fling Kidlit contest!
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Getting caught in the rain is a Spring rite of passage! Thanks for sharing!
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